All Comments on 'The Cost of a Debt Ch. 01'

paying her sons debts and then goes into slavery in exchange for a one thousand dollar debt is too stupid to teach and deserves what he gets. Slavery for her so her son can get into college foortball and start some big time gambling is almost as smart as stopping a random car, giving them $100 and asking them to go get you a hamburger and expect to get food or your change back.

The kid is grown let him take care of his own debts and by seeing the pics of her daughter she should know the daughter is selling pics of herself to someone already. Oh well one is born every minute isnt one?

For $1000 her son sold her soul. By the way how did the son gain ownership to sell her?

Now we have the story of a wimp wife instead of a wimp husband!

I enjoyed the story so far and am glad that you have gone to the trouble to write it. I have to agree with the previous comments that the premiss for the woman being blackmailed is a bit weak since she is paying her sons and daughters debts so Alex has seriously bad judgement when it comes to dealing with her children. I expect though that the next chapter will have the Head Master getting more control over Alex, at the moment he has not really asked her to do anything much and she is hoping to "fix" her childrens mistakes again.

Looking forward to the next chapter as Alex gets herself deeper into debt....

Well written beginning of an erotic tale. I lok forward to further installments

So far nothing special very predictable we need a part three that frees alex and sets things right she doesn t need this . . .

I'm guessing it's her husband whos the head master. I wouldn't be surprised.

luv 2 b in her butt with both a master and mistress