All Comments on 'The Country Club Ch. 01'

Too long of a "lead in" and too little discussion of the effects of the torture devices. The eroticism was very restrained and unexciting. But we'll try Chap. 2

Looking forward to Chapter 2.

I decided, rightly or wrongly, to read Ch.01 to Ch.06 before making any comment and then comment on each story in chronological order.

I like the fact that although Mandy and Neil are still the characters they were in Holiday Loving that the plot has changed direction and, if only for the time being perhaps, focussed on Mandy’s nymphomaniac tendencies on a more personal level. Seems to be much more detailed writing than in Holiday Loving, although that impression may just be because it’s a different type of story, and I thought that the descriptions of the medieval torture equipment didn’t actually need to be as detailed as they were. Certainly seems as though you did a lot of research in one way or another.

Another story up to your high standard.