All Comments on 'The Coven Ch. 00'

Great start. As few grammar mishaps but a very good story. Can't wait for mlre

The POV changes kinda made it different. But I have to say i did not really like that. sup.p.ose it was more effective at introductions.

nice introduction. i am curious to see where you are going with this series

Its a good start yo a story. I dig the POV change. But you might want to use "the" a little more. Just a tip. Keep it up I want to read more.

Love the way u write cant wait to read more of ur stuff

Pretty good start though I feel the dialogue between the werewolf and the witch was a little rushed.