All Comments on 'The Coven Ch. 04'

it is develloping nice. i would like to have longer chapters. but i really like the story and the background is very intriguing. keep up the work

more details would b lovely but i do love ur story it is brilliant

stop writing like a virgin?

There is more to romance and sex and you write like a male virgin. First off, two female lovers don't just use their fingers on each other.

The act of sex is a dance, touch, sensation, taste. You feel, hear, see, smell, taste everything. Kissing, touching, rubbing, pinching, vibrating moans and groans, lifting each other higher.

Read, learn...get a dictionary.