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by mrshyboy
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Anonymousalmost 8 years agoDitto
More like flash story, or the notes for a real story to be fleshed out.
ukdukeover 6 years agoAnd the romance is where...?
Sorry no romance here. A girl too shy to talk to a guy is suddenly happy to be finger fucked, pussy AND ass, in a Public place???
Sorry not real not romantic.
As a striker its ok but in the wrong category. Like pt 2 same issues. She was roo shy to talk but experienced enough to want it up the ass!??
The thing about romance is it is rooted in just enough reality that it could happen to the reader.
Points for trying but better luck next time!
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