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Anonymousabout 6 years agoDrop the story
This shit is idiotic. Life imprisonment and death sentences for shoplifting? Is she suicidal?
SensitiveHandsabout 6 years agoI am going to assume English is not your first language.
Like the initial story. But you need an editor or really need to proofread and check the meaning of certain words. Good Luck and thank you for sharing!
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