All Comments on 'The Cupid Effect Ch. 05'

Very intense couple of pages!

Now, the long wait for the next chapter. I like the return of power on the side of Dexter. I can't wait for more Tiffany story if that is what you choose to do or someone else. I like that the story isn't just some reason to get to the wham-bam moments. I can sense that there is a possibility that Dexter and Agnes end up together?

So far, I have loved every one of your Cupid Effect submissions! Please, please, please keep them coming!

....with only a couple of technical issues to consider.

I must say that your incorrect use of "amongst" to describe the location of a driver's license in one's pocket is a bit tough to swallow, but I'm only mentioning it as a sample of instances that make the reader go, "huh?".

Again, I urge a little more care with the technical aspects of your storytelling.

It is precisely this attention to detail that separates the masters from the wannabes and you're too good a storyteller to allow petty crap like that yo hold you back.

Thanks, looking forward to your next installment!

Pretty hot how Dexter took Charge for a change. Kelsey is just hot. Looking for more of this amazing story.

This is one of the hottest stories on Lit I love it cant wait for more sweetie xxx

Awe, Brian seems nice. It would be interesting if Agnes rejected Dex, even with the drugs effects. He's kind of a jerk.

is she his next target. will Kelsey and Tiffany find them selves second class citizens.

Who will be next for Dexter to Conquer. Will the Vice Principal start taking her Exercise Seriously or will she just Grovel.

Ever since the chemical was splashed in his face, a series of unimaginable (and sex filled) situations have occured. But what now?

Will Dex just step aside and let his former friend experience love without him with a seemingly nice guy??

Or will he remove the newcomer and misuse his new power to dominate and own her like he did the others?

What of the other bottle of chemical? What if it should fall into some other guys hands... or girls?

SO MANY ROADS POSSIBLE AND SO MANY FUTURES IN THE BALANCE!!!

I LOVE IT, this story gets a 5 star from me.

I just wanted to add that I agree with one of the commentators. I hope Dex doesn't become mean to Agnes... I like the pacing of everything. I feel like the story can change into something else. "Power corrupts" but Dex would know that. I hope he and Agnes work things out but not to the point that he does not take advantage of his power and skills. Mondotoken has final say of course and I don't presume to think or say otherwise. However, I needed to add my thoughts since I have read many stories in this section that have made the Protagonist into a monster at worst and Jerk at the least and forgetting the origin story. I then see as degrees in readership and so the story dies. I don't want that to happen here. The story is too good.

I'm a big fan of the series and I can't help but take guesses at where the story is heading. My current guess is that Agnes used some of the Androstenone-X on herself to make Dexter jealous, and that's why Brian is being such a mangina around her.

I hope he is able to add Agnes to his harem soon!

Just curious...

Currently working on a new chapter. Should be posted soon.

I'm still laughing at this silliness. Should have been posted in Humor and Satire. Too funny!

Please tell me this story has a happy ending like Tad fucks off forever as well as Brian, the chemical wears off or he removes it and the girls fuck off and he get with his best friend.

too much

good story. the principal part was kind of out there, unless the chemical made him kind of retarded. If he wanted to patch things upbwith his friend, he'd probably cut ties with the girls, though showing that pricipal what fore and then leaving her high and wet is good recenge.

Looks like Agnes might be taking some of that chemical herself. That dude seems smitten with her in the same way the girls are with the MC. That's my guess anyway. The clinginess of those under its influence is rather annoying. They get in the way of everything. Kelsey is so annoying; bitch never shuts up.