All Comments on 'The Dance'

This was good

Made me feel like I was there watching the show!

Very visual w/ great imagery. It was as if I was there watching the entire thing. Awesome.

okay Mr. Bates....own up...what happened after that??? I can't believe you packed up and went home!!! ~grin~ I know how just 'reading' it made me feel - the visual of your dance and her watching was very erotic. A beautiful set up for Story # 2?

she didn't TOUCH you! That's a HOT story! So sexy and I'd love to have you do that for me... but I'd have to catch your cum in my mouth or at least lick your hands clean! Whew!!! I'd love for you to be my "private dancer"! And I second that other person! I want to know what happened NEXT! :p

Like you, that has been one of my fantasies for years. I have tried so hard to do it but just reading you hot hot story has given me new hope. I just hop it was true it was so hot your stripping for her.

Very hot.... I could see you standing in front of me the whole time. Hope you write more soon!

Great tale of exhabitionism.One suggestion a good paragraph is 5-12 lines, more than 15 gets hard to read. Keep writing!

mrbates,

This is a wonderful story and let me tell you, you can dance for me anytime! When I was done with this my breathing was shallow and I could almost feel your heat and smell your sex infront of me....... Mmmm......

lust_4_u

That was a very interesting story. I love to read about sexual experiences from a man's point of view.