All Comments on 'The Dark Blue Tie'

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chytownchytownover 11 years ago
Short Sweet***

And Nasty!!! Thanks for sharing (no pun intended)

ythebadgerythebadgerover 11 years ago
Too brief

too sudden. too lacking motivation. Plenty of potential but it needed more development. 3*

JusttooldJusttooldover 11 years ago
good

A little short but a good read anyway.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Intense and Fun

Your story had excellent balance and flowed perfectly. Not too heavy handed and VERY sensual!

I definitely wished it was longer, not because it was too short, but because it was so filled with possibilities! And I'll spend the evening imagining some of them ...

Thank you!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Splitlicker likes it!

Big surprise.

1*

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