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AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
More.

More, please. A good start to a beautiful relationship.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Sorry but.......

Sorry but it doesn't work for me because you write in the present tense.

You are telling what has happened - a story, so wrutung I do this and you do that just doesn't help the flow.

Apart from that the storyline was good.

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Just a Texas Gentleman Sir with a good heart and a wicked streak with a fondness for submissive women.

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