All Comments on 'The Dream Daughter'

The style of writing entranced me. Your words provoked me. The story carried me. The power of the female in heels made me cum.

I originally had submitted this under the "fetish" heading and I believe it was recategorized because I included the "incest" tag. While I think that was appropriate as there are certainly some taboo interactions and emotions between father and daughter here, I do feel this is much more of a fetish story than an incest one. I will see if I can find someone to move the story appropriately.

Liked it, if only because it was refreshingly different to the usual non-imaginative stuff that dominates Literotica.

Try putting this kind of thing under Fetish, rather than incest/taboo. Because there was no sex in this.

While this is admittedly the first story I ever wrote, I still feel like the story accomplishes it's goal rather well. Kat's cruelty and Keith's shameful fantasies create for a scenario where reality is questionable and relationships are redefined. It may be fantasy or it may be actually happening, but I preferred to leave the story there so the reader could enjoy their own fantasies about what would cone in the future for this strange pair.

i was waiting for something to happen but for what?? awful try again.