All Comments on 'The Daughter's Friend'

I found this story to be uninteresting. It's well-written, I suppose, at least by the standards of Literotica; but it came off as detached and casual, almost more like a newspaper article (well, not a regular newspaper, maybe).

The dialog felt stilted and unnatural. The use of Chapter headings without numbers was a little odd.

I never felt drawn in to the story, never felt any real passion. It was relentlessly adequate, I suppose.

Not bad, but I didn't really like it.

Very nice.

I enjoyed the story. It was nice, real, and friendly. I wish more people handle relationships with the other person in mind. Thank you for the tale.

BOB

please give us some story....make an effort. its hard to believe a girl that doesn't like to be touched would suddenly ask an old man to screw her. you could have done something with the father of a friend of mine to justify/explain it

Too long and drawn out. The concept is nice. Would have been best if this was a short novel. Would be a great contender for a Erotic award.