All Comments on 'The Day It All Changed'

This was a great story....now please finish the other one :)

I really liked the story. Just seem to move a little fast.

WHERE HAVE YOU BEEN ALL MY LIFE? lol anyways I loved it! hope you continue to to write and post stories like this one. (MAKE A FRIGGIN' SEQUEL!) anyways good story!

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That was very hot! Loved it. Cheers :D

Cute story. A little too fast, and spelling, grammar and extra words distracting. Still a good start to begin developing your characters so your story stands out.

Have done as you suggested now onto the sequel hehe I thought it was great

How did you come up with these names together and their back story like how matt is a virgin?

THIS SITE IS PAST ITS BEST THE STORIES ON HERE ARE ALL FUCKING OLD HAT

Love this story. #moreplease