All Comments on 'The Day It All Changed'

by Baby789

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Archtec77Archtec77over 5 years ago

Love this story. #moreplease

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

THIS SITE IS PAST ITS BEST THE STORIES ON HERE ARE ALL FUCKING OLD HAT

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Wow

How did you come up with these names together and their back story like how matt is a virgin?

lonesomedove66lonesomedove66over 12 years ago

Have done as you suggested now onto the sequel hehe I thought it was great

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Editing

Cute story. A little too fast, and spelling, grammar and extra words distracting. Still a good start to begin developing your characters so your story stands out.

Contest4JenContest4Jenabout 13 years ago
HOT!

That was very hot! Loved it. Cheers :D

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
OH BABY!

WHERE HAVE YOU BEEN ALL MY LIFE? lol anyways I loved it! hope you continue to to write and post stories like this one. (MAKE A FRIGGIN' SEQUEL!) anyways good story!

N

;)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
good story

I really liked the story. Just seem to move a little fast.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
great

This was a great story....now please finish the other one :)

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