All Comments on 'The Day My Life Ended and Began Ch. 01'

The setting of the story is well started, I'm personally really looking forward to this story. Five stars for a way-too-short, promising first chapter.

Looking forward to your next chapter. I enjoy your writing thanks

hopefully its for the best of both, TK U MLJ LV NV

Hey all! Thanks for the encouragement. This will most likely be a very short story compared to the ones I usually read on here. I work a very physical job, and a slow week for me is nearly 50 hours. Add kids and wife... you get the picture. Good news though, I actually have everything already written. I just have to type it and submit. The reasons I didn't submit everything I have prepped so far are as follows: 1) no editor. None of my requests have been answered. 2) I was unsure of the level of approval. 3) I didn't want y'all to be waiting for months for something new.

I can appreciate your enjoyment of the buildup. But I must warn you, I can't write the feminine voice for crap. Hence the need of an understanding female editor! I hope to submit more chapters very soon.

As of October 2018 this story is unfinished and has not been active since 2012.