All Comments on 'The Deal'

I love the romantic feel. I think she should push a little part time chastity play if they continue! Great story thx

well done great story hot action!! my fantasies in your words. I'd love more and more mini stories maybe

Is when can I get away from this bat-shit crazy woman? Was he REALLY that dumb? He seemed to have the IQ of a pea. When your lead character is dumber than a rock your story just sinks.

This is a deal I'd happily make in a heartbeat. Hence why I wrote the story.

You know to the person who does all this anonymous bashing you need to let a woman tie you up sometime, surrender control for a while to her sensuality. You might find that you like it.

The one thing that makes me the queasiest is the Black Eyed Peas lyric.

I know that one has been made fun of