by EmeraldSolitaire
The one thing that makes me the queasiest is the Black Eyed Peas lyric.
I know that one has been made fun of
This is a deal I'd happily make in a heartbeat. Hence why I wrote the story.
You know to the person who does all this anonymous bashing you need to let a woman tie you up sometime, surrender control for a while to her sensuality. You might find that you like it.
Is when can I get away from this bat-shit crazy woman? Was he REALLY that dumb? He seemed to have the IQ of a pea. When your lead character is dumber than a rock your story just sinks.
well done great story hot action!! my fantasies in your words. I'd love more and more mini stories maybe
I love the romantic feel. I think she should push a little part time chastity play if they continue! Great story thx