All Comments on 'The Deal Pt. 01'

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KabirPlaysKabirPlaysabout 6 years ago
Commendable and Intriguing

Very well written piece. I’d love to read the continuing part of the same. Also, I’d love an intimate tet-a-tete with the author of this story. It would be a delight.

SusmittaSusmittaabout 6 years ago
Awesome

Awesome writting, mind blowing. Keep posting

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Request

Please publish the other parts of the story soon..

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Average

Very very average overall. The grammar, the story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago

Waiting for the next episode.

It will be spicier if Sakshi gives in reluctantly and feel the remorse for her act

csltcsltover 5 years ago
5 stars!

Thank You!

Please continue...

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Waiting for your part 2

Good story

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago

Please Continue dear. Its been too long

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
where is the second part...it has been so long !

please publish the second part soon

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Upload the 2nd part buddy

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