All Comments on 'The Demands Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
What a good story

At last! Teen sex that turns into lasting fidelity! Richard seems a wonderful catch and should have some delicious hair on that gorgeous chest!

Brett78xBrett78xover 9 years ago
Believable - it doesn't in here often enough

Thanks, Derek. My first experiences when consolidated, approximate much of what you have in this story. I could believe that a young couple, careful of each other's feelings and curious about what they're feeling and hoping to elicit like responses from each, could do all of that fun stuff. Thank you for sharing!

Westman99Westman99almost 2 years ago

Lovely story.......so much more realistic than most. Took me back to my youth.

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