All Comments on 'The Demon Is Her Knight On A Steed'

Good start

I hope there is another chapter.

Hoping for more. 5 stars ~K.

5 Stars! Nice story! Some more!

So she just left her baby? What a terrible mother

From the way that it read, it states in paragraph 13 that, " When my husband would beat me I could feel your anger and it grew especially when he'd let his son have

his way with me." So she's a bad mother in leaving her son even though its hinted that he raped her?

From my reading, it was her husband's son not hers. So it would be her stepson.

I want to see more

While I appreciate the feed back and letting me know of your confusion (which I will be careful with in the next story) Her son was rapping her and was supposed to be like the step-son and Vincent killed them both I will be sure to double check my pages next time thank you for your feed back :)

I really liked this a lot... Continue please

Needs some serious backstory work. Very Lacking atm.

3/5