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All Comments on 'The Demon's Disciple Ch. 01'

by BobbyZeus

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Not even in Sci/Fi would this be worth reading

Just too strange. The attempt at cleverness or originality failed miserably. Simply bad story telling.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Love. It

Please please write more soon

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Wish there had been a chapter 2

it was just getting interesting!

BobbyZeusBobbyZeusover 8 years agoAuthor
Chapter 2 out soon.

Chapter 2 has been submitted and is pending approval. We've been writing way out of order. Chapter 3 is outlined, 4 - 6 are nearly finished.

Also, this stuff IS weird. It's supposed to be weird and WAAAAY over the top. I get it, though, its' not for everyone. Thanks for reading and commenting all the same.

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