All Comments on 'The Descending of Jessica'

Autobiographical?

Very believable situations for a teen. Will look forward to next chapter!

I lovvveeed your story. Cant wait for chapter 2

Very well written. I look forward to reading more of your work!

5 Stars for this story and a personal thank you from a 62 year old male for the information about a girls wet panties being uncomfortable when out of place. Yes i should have thought of that by now, but I prefer removing them and tossing them out the window as I drive done the road at 70 MPH. Which disturbs young ladies for some reason and is very difficult to do with pantyhose Yes joking but the impulse is there at times. Very good story

You weave a good tale with your writing. Erotica is not just about sex. Most times, if the story teller is good (which you are), the build up can be as good as the story. Very nicely done. Keep up the good work and thanks for a tale that is interesting and engaging.

Where was Jessica when I was in high school? :+))

Where is she now?!! :+)))

No one has commented on this one in forever! To answer your question, read the rest in the series (a new one is coming, as promised two or three years ago) and leave more comments. I totally need the attention :D

-J

There's so much to enjoy about this series of stories even as I root for Brent and against that idiot prom date.

Danny, like most male adolescents, was a self-centered idiot, unable to make rational decisions & evaluate potential consequences of his actions. In other words, you painted a very accurate picture of a teenage boy. I'm glad Brent was there & I hope he helps compensate for the pain from his friend, Danny.

Re: Garter belt and peeing. I'm just old enough to remember when women wore garter belts on a daily basis. They NEVER wore the garter belt over their panties. They ALWAYS wore them under!! The whole thing of unfastening the clips that attached to the the stockings however many time a day they wanted to pee was far too inconvenient.

Great story by the way and well written. I'm going to follow you so I can read more of your stories. Thank you for sharing.