All Comments on 'The Descent of Inanna'

You have a great beginning here, but I think you could have chosen a better place to end. Perhaps after the battle, unless you are planning an immediate second story. It leaves the reader feeling left in the middle of the story...or so it seems. Other than that it was a good start..keep up the good work, and good luck.

I would have liked to see a bit more background information; however, I look forward to the next section.

"They wish to go to Babylon. There are no war gods there."

Oh how wrong you are, priestess. They had, at the very least, nine different gods/goddesses of war in Babylon. You lot will be sorely dissapointed.

Of course, one of them is named Ishtar, so that may have been what you were hinting at...

Good story, the magazine should love it! :)