All Comments on 'The Device: Trial'

by Sean Renaud

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Anne08 almost 15 years ago

Good, but short

That was a pretty good story, although it could have been longer. Perhaps you have upcoming chapters to add to it?

Anonymousalmost 15 years ago

Pathetic

Misogynistic crap. There's nothing more pathetic than a guy getting off on ruining a girl's life.

Ryanrahl almost 3 years ago

Why are all your stories just a prompt? Like this is the first quarter (at most) of a great story? If you actually filled it out youd be one of the best authors on the site.

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