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by ImAStatisticInLife
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Perimedesalmost 8 years agoInteresting
Definitely not the regular story for this genre. Proofread and find an editor, please. I'd like to see where this is going.
RedArrowKuczynskialmost 8 years agoCuts off at the good part? Booo!
Keep writing, I wish to see where this goes!
WhiskeyIsGoodalmost 8 years agoGood start
A bit to short and it kinda sucked that you cut off, right at the good part. BUT, it's a good story and I definitely hope to see more soon. I like the whole fantasy concept.
wolf9696almost 8 years agolike it.. she better be able to use that weapon between her legs, lol. hmmm, perhaps a bond between them keeps em with each other????
baikalisanalmost 8 years agoLooks like a good start
My mind spun with possibilities. I'd like to see if you choose one of them! Please continue.
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