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All Comments on 'The Devil You Make Ch. 01'

by ImAStatisticInLife

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baikalisanbaikalisanalmost 8 years ago
Looks like a good start

My mind spun with possibilities. I'd like to see if you choose one of them! Please continue.

SouthernPassion53SouthernPassion53almost 8 years ago
good start

It is a good start. Keep going.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
So far so good

Don't stop now!

CherieMCherieMalmost 8 years ago
Lovely

I like it very much and am excited about where this will go.

wolf9696wolf9696almost 8 years ago

like it.. she better be able to use that weapon between her legs, lol. hmmm, perhaps a bond between them keeps em with each other????

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Good story

Please continue

WhiskeyIsGoodWhiskeyIsGoodalmost 8 years ago
Good start

A bit to short and it kinda sucked that you cut off, right at the good part. BUT, it's a good story and I definitely hope to see more soon. I like the whole fantasy concept.

RedArrowKuczynskiRedArrowKuczynskialmost 8 years ago
Cuts off at the good part? Booo!

Keep writing, I wish to see where this goes!

PerimedesPerimedesalmost 8 years ago
Interesting

Definitely not the regular story for this genre. Proofread and find an editor, please. I'd like to see where this is going.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago

Great start hope you continue it. Also give the succubus a big cock

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