All Comments on 'The DJ Ch. 01'

I really loved the details in the story, a lot of details.

But felt a bit weird about that BDSM part, it went so fast and Hillary didn't like question what it was or anything.

I would wonder a lot what it was if it was the first time i did hear/see that word.

Else, it is lovely, and i can't wait for part 2 of it.

this is the best story ever she rocks. and the best writer i have ever seen in my book she is aswome

You really draw your story. This is vivid and vibrant,the sex scene was very plausible but it didnt detract. I look forward to Part 2, and hopefully part 22.

<br>4 stars - could have been 5. A couple of minor "skipped over" bits, but otherwise very nice. (Although I was just starting to get a little wet, when it ended...)<br><br>

Take your time getting the next, (and any further), installments <i>just right</i>.<br><br>

Kim xx

i love how u added a great story wit her past work and all. the sex scene was great also. i like how u where very detail in everything even wit the part of her buying the station. keep the good work n i cant wait to read more of it. i will love it more if u added a lesbian threesome lol. well dnt stop man

I love the story and intriguing detail you add to build your characters' roles. The story is rich and definitely leaves me waiting for more! Thank you for your talent.

Great story so far please dont leave it hanging like it is. More moooorrrreee please and finish it.

i do honestly love this story please finish it