by happyday
Great story so far please dont leave it hanging like it is. More moooorrrreee please and finish it.
I love the story and intriguing detail you add to build your characters' roles. The story is rich and definitely leaves me waiting for more! Thank you for your talent.
i love how u added a great story wit her past work and all. the sex scene was great also. i like how u where very detail in everything even wit the part of her buying the station. keep the good work n i cant wait to read more of it. i will love it more if u added a lesbian threesome lol. well dnt stop man
<br>4 stars - could have been 5. A couple of minor "skipped over" bits, but otherwise very nice. (Although I was just starting to get a little wet, when it ended...)<br><br>
Take your time getting the next, (and any further), installments <i>just right</i>.<br><br>
Kim xx
You really draw your story. This is vivid and vibrant,the sex scene was very plausible but it didnt detract. I look forward to Part 2, and hopefully part 22.
this is the best story ever she rocks. and the best writer i have ever seen in my book she is aswome
I really loved the details in the story, a lot of details.
But felt a bit weird about that BDSM part, it went so fast and Hillary didn't like question what it was or anything.
I would wonder a lot what it was if it was the first time i did hear/see that word.
Else, it is lovely, and i can't wait for part 2 of it.