All Comments on 'The Doctor Is In'

If you think this story is worth pursuing, please let me know. This is my first attempt at writing, and it's a whole lot harder than it looks, so I don't want to bother with the work it would take to continue the story if no on cares. I'm not particularly interested in negative comments though. If you aren't paying for the story, you don't really have the right to complain, and since this is brand new to me, I'm still not thick skinned enough for criticism. :) You have every right not to like the story, but I have every right not to hear about it. Thanks for understanding

Very interested in where this goes for all three of them. The doc has a captive pool of men to choose from and now that she has crossed the line in can get pretty interesting.

I thought you did a good job with this story. A little bit of everything. I would be interested to hear how it continue for each character. When the prisoner goes back to general pop, the guard gets turned by the prisoner or other guards? The doctor is blackmailed by other inmates? All sorts of possibilities in this one, the inmate tells the wrong person what happened....

You made a very bad place (prison) pretty interesting.

I especially liked the doctor being a relatively young female.

Also hope the story is pure fiction. You do seem to have some knowledge of medical things, even though not up to date on some. ;)

All in all - a VERY GOOD 1st story! Please continue.

It was different than what I was expecting due to the catorogy, pleaselently suprised.

Great start to a series. Keep on writing pls.

Body temperatures at or above 105 degrees are fatal. Just saying.

The brain cells start to die at 104, other than that good story!

An adult fever of 105 is reason for concern, but by itself will not cause death. Brain damage and death are not a threat until temp of 106 or more, and otherwise healthy individuals have survived much higher temperatures than poor David

Oh yes we have .

If you put it in the public domain , we are entitled to comment.

Politely , of course .

I love this story and hope you write more like this.