All Comments on 'The Donor'

But nice. Well written. Decent character development for such a short piece. It felt genuine

Nicely written. some character development. I am interested in seeing where this story goes.

I'd like to see where this goes? Right now the possibilities are numerous....

i hope it goes on.

If you liked this one, and would like another story on this theme, see "A Great Way to Get Kids" by Imhapless. No turkey baster needed! ;-)

Very sweet and erotic. I have an impregnation fetish and this hit all the right spots.

Well developed and written. Need followups or more along tis story line. Need to procreate now! :-)

Being related to a woman who is a lesbian and has been married to another for some years I have gotten to know several other lesbian women. My relation and her partner have adopted a child and several of their friends have done likewise. Another good friend of thiers decided to bear a child herself and elected to decide on a sperm doner and become artificially inseminated. The process went well and they had a child. The couople wanted another child and they went to the same sperm doner and she had another child with the same father. From what I hear from this community it is way out of line for the mother-to-be be impregnated by the sperm doner by having sex with him. Nice dream, but really not remotely likely. Especially to have the partner have sex with him also. Nice fantasy, but it doesn't happen.

Would think having sex is how this is done.

Sorry, but "had sex to donate sperm and voila fireworks!" is contrived, tired, and unimaginative.Maybe build some bi-curious plot if this is what you want.

Really erotic story. Great characterization and attention to details. Keep up the great work. Baby making, cumming into pussy, is so hot. I will definitely read the rest of your stories.

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The premise and the initial characterization show promise, but the pacing is too rushed and the relationship/interaction between the characters need more development.

We need second part where Brit is paying for the kid for next 18 years with no visitation rights. Seriously how is a one off hookup in the Romance section