All Comments on 'The Door Shut Behind Me'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Don't leave me hanging!

A nice slow start, good build and a great but quick ending. I need another chapter! What happens now that she, and everyone else, knows that she is a slut?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Really Enjoyed it

I don't feel it "needs" another chapter, it felt complete somehow. It left you wondering, but at the same time felt right. But its up to you, if there is another chapter id read it. ~Harlequin

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Good one!

Five stars. Thanks for writing. tom anon

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago

Sigh. Magical cock strikes again. Where is her good girl-slut switch installed? And honey, it was not "kinda like rape." Would have been better with more development at all stages, but lots of folks like instant slut.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Well written short story!

Totally doesn't need another chapter, it had great closure. I loved the brief development and it was hot, especially for people into humiliation (of which I am not, but can still appreciate it). Kudos!

- Ash

tazz317tazz317almost 11 years ago
SURE BEATS SPIN THE BOTTLE

and welcome to their parlor. TK U MLJ LV NV

josephstevensjosephstevensalmost 11 years ago
Hot!

Great short hot story! Loved it....can we have more stories from you...they are good and powerful....x

flirty_but_niceflirty_but_nicealmost 11 years ago

Girl, you are my uber author! You know what I mean <wink>.

HeatseekingmoisturemissleHeatseekingmoisturemissleover 7 years ago

Only 7minutes! Too bad time ran out.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
An overflowing mouth

Would have completed this. Or pulling the door shut. And her friends seeing her hands tied. 5* and going to see what else you have. Party aftermath for this character......

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