by ladyjane2099
A nice slow start, good build and a great but quick ending. I need another chapter! What happens now that she, and everyone else, knows that she is a slut?
I don't feel it "needs" another chapter, it felt complete somehow. It left you wondering, but at the same time felt right. But its up to you, if there is another chapter id read it. ~Harlequin
Sigh. Magical cock strikes again. Where is her good girl-slut switch installed? And honey, it was not "kinda like rape." Would have been better with more development at all stages, but lots of folks like instant slut.
Totally doesn't need another chapter, it had great closure. I loved the brief development and it was hot, especially for people into humiliation (of which I am not, but can still appreciate it). Kudos!
- Ash
Great short hot story! Loved it....can we have more stories from you...they are good and powerful....x
Would have completed this. Or pulling the door shut. And her friends seeing her hands tied. 5* and going to see what else you have. Party aftermath for this character......