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All Comments on 'The Doorbell Rang Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Very nice!

For a real time guy...this would be the very least what i'd want myself...plus i have a thing for guys who fiddle with their glasses

AzPilotAzPilotover 14 years ago
Very well done. Your descriptive skills are-

very good. I could see and feel what was going on. Thank you!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Not too bad, kind of a surprise

Why chapter 1? This story has ended. What else is there?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
I'm liking this author !

I like the concept of the story, it's fun and hot. Thanks for sharing !

EnochaEnochaalmost 10 years ago
Hot fun!

Very enjoyable. Thank you!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

So many questions... so many possibilities...

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Yummy! I really felt like I was there and enjoyed how the story unfolded. There was just the right amount of dialogue between the characters.

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