All Comments on 'The Droplet Lover'

by DGA2000

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AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Hot Story!

Your writing concept is great. I was very intrigued with this story and the way the girls kept getting bolder. I do hope that this story is followed by sequels of Bobbie and Janey getting more inventive and bolder with their milking process. Keep up the great work.

furetofuretoover 9 years ago
This is a good story

The great concept and the realism of it carry it despite its (few) flaws. You come off very defensive in the author's prelude, though, and that's a turnoff.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Great nonconsent story

Not the usual type of story found in this sextion. I loved the three characters and the realism. However you invited a pact with us readers when you said it was your first ever written piece. You wanted our opinion. Two others and I have given it to you. Don't you agree, with your talent, you should write another imaginative tale?

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