All Comments on 'The Druid Ch. 02'

He's treated as a slave, how will he get power and revenge?

^^^Why would he want revenge he will gain power via education.^^^

Well written

Now you need to develop the general plot ie the story beyond the sex

There is also a need for additional character development

I really appreciate the feedback. Chapter 3 is nearly finished so hope to post it this week.

I've got another 100,000 words (10 chapters) mapped out and the story is going to pick up a little more don't worry :)

Chapter 3 was challenging but I hope you enjoy it as much as I did writing it and if not then please let me know.