All Comments on 'The Escape Room - Room 02: Eliza'

Wonderful stories. Soooo hot!

Thank you so much for reading and taking the time to let me know you enjoyed my story! You, dear reader, have made my day.

Kept me hooked!

And Next Room is HOT!

You are the best... Thank you so much for taking the time to tell me you liked this. Your words are what motivate me to continue!

Im at a loss for words on how brilliant this series is so far. I keep coming back to this series. You have an amazing talent! Im looking forward to the next part of this series of brilliance! Well done!

This story turns me on soo much, I get so wet reading it!

Nice work, but once all 4 are his, will they all live together?

Wow... This is an amazing compliment! Thank you so so much.

I couldn't ask for higher praise than that! :D

I guess we'll have to wait and see, won't we?

Can't wait for the next one, they're all awesome!

where is it?

Currently "Room 3: Marcella", is available on Amazon. I'm posting it for free for my Patreon patrons today and then submitting it here. If you absolutely can't wait, you can find it at Amazon (https://www.amazon.com/JC-Beleren/e/B073SY96BD) or Patreon (https://www.patreon.com/jcbeleren). Otherwise it will be appearing in a few days once it gets through the Literotica publication process.

I love this story so far.

Great writing, very descriptive, readers are pulled in!

Hey great stuff, exactly hits my spot. An idea, try making mind control harem with girls having hierarchies and compete with one another who gives the best pleasure. Maybe have orgies with them, and chance for solo sex highly coveted. While we collect girls with best parts, 1 with best blowjob, 1 with best face, one with no gag reflex, and such.

Absolutely love your way of writing, clear imagery and a consistent tone and pace - great work!

I'm sincerely enjoying your writing.

You can help me...

Hey! It's JC, and I'm here to ask for your professional support.

Have you enjoyed reading my web novels? Do they give you hours of entertainment? Then please consider supporting the artist who wrote them.

If each person who read all the way through one of my novels paid $3-6 (about the price of a bag of potato chips, and less than half the cost of a paperback book) then I would be able to continue writing indefinitely. As it is, my current trajectory will have me drastically cutting down on my writing volume within the next 6 months.

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Across the world, to wherever you are, you have my deepest thanks and my heartfelt gratitude.

With much love,

JC

This is a great series

Two down and two to go, will he survive?

Another great chapter! Girl/girl play is always a welcome change of pace to renew a man's sexual energy. Thank you for sharing your vision and talent.

Well done