All Comments on 'The Experiment Ch. 01'

If she prefers to have a man take control in the bedroom, why would she have trouble spending an entire evening being submissive? And this garbage would be better off in BDSM, not loving wives. Unlikeable characters coupled with with poorly written dialogue and mediocre sex scenes made this not worth the time spent to read it.

No stars.

# 1

If you are such a wonderful judge of writing, why do we never see anything of yours here?

To WW14 -- I have read better but you deserve five for the atrocious treatment nonny has meted out to you.

Really? And it still needs a part 2? Wasn't enough? 1*

To write such shit and to read this shit , there has to be something wrong with you mentally, and no I didn't read it I only skimmed the first quarter page and knew it was nothing but garbage, you have to be sick in the head to find this entertaining or erotic seek help RIGHT KNOW.

BDSM would have gotten you a better rating, Thanks for sharing

Did you even read this? All the wrong words, misspelled words, just awful writing. "Role over?" Really. Just couldn't get past the first two paragraphs. If you can't be bothered to read your stuff, neither can I.

You clearly have trouble dealing with women. I don't. So this is deeply unattractive to me (the little I read).

I expected dominance/submission. Instead, it's degradation/humiliation. A very different mind-set.

Thanks, but I'll have to skip whatever follows

....I couldn't honestly score or comment/critique what I don't read through.

Wish the old guys would've whipped your arrogant ass. Your writing skills suck