by Urtoy2be
I really enjoy this story, and your other stories! Please continue writing them! I wanna know what comes next!
Sincerely,
Lightprincess98
Part 2 really contradicts much of what was in Chapter 1. You should have gotten an editor to help you write one story, then chop it into chapters.
This story is in complete contradiction to the first chapter. It's like the author decided to write a sissy wank story and lazily used the same character names. Matt was conflicted and questioning about his sexuality in chapter 1, asking "why am I looking at his cock?", "I'm not gay, am I?". But in this story he has been openly gay for years. Ridiculous.