All Comments on 'The Ex's New Toy Pt. 02'

This story is in complete contradiction to the first chapter. It's like the author decided to write a sissy wank story and lazily used the same character names. Matt was conflicted and questioning about his sexuality in chapter 1, asking "why am I looking at his cock?", "I'm not gay, am I?". But in this story he has been openly gay for years. Ridiculous.

Part 2 really contradicts much of what was in Chapter 1. You should have gotten an editor to help you write one story, then chop it into chapters.

I really enjoy this story, and your other stories! Please continue writing them! I wanna know what comes next!

Sincerely,

Lightprincess98