All Comments on 'The Ex's Revenge'

I can understand one of life's losers writing/publishing this as a fantasy of revenge

What makes it really creepy is that the self same loser thinks there is something erotic about rape/blackmail/extortion/conspiracy It is not clear how many felonies the protagonist committed - because his feelings were hurt

Great literature this isn't Mediocre porn it isn't Bad porn - of the kind which can be erotic only to border line sociopaths or worse - this is

I can think of a couple exs from my college days that deserve similar treatment. Arriving at a party with her new boyfriend, neglecting to inform me that we weren't going out anymore. With a smiling girlfriend saying, "That's how we weed out the weak ones." Of course, I knew most of the people at the party. That was almost twenty years ago and I still remember it like yesterday. I saw her about ten years later with two kids and an overweight balding husband getting into an old rusted out minivan. She didn't age very well. Maybe if someone would have done that to her back then she would have started treating people a little better and not just think of herself. No, I didn't say, Hi.

Good story,thanks.

Loved it, I hope you continue it.

I didn't think I would like it but it was really well written. And to other commenters: Stop posting comments about hating stories like this. If you don't like it, don't read it. You just look ignorant. You can see it is non-Concent.

Very creative! Loved it- more please!

That so hot! Please continue this story

If I knew this girl and found out what you did - I would hunt you down!!!!!!!!!!

You don't have her anymore because of the lowlife you are. Fortunately, there is always payback and assholes like you have a habit of stumbling into bad experiences!

Great story. I really liked the set up and the blackmail. Great sexual description. I think the only thing that would have been better is if Mike would have joined in and fucked her in her ass.

the revenge torture may be out of line, but it gives him a Big O. TK U MLJ LV NV

the guys ditch and dump so many girls by each week.....faking a whole relationship at the batting of an eyelid!! ;) married guys and those with girlfriends visit brothels and stuff like hell...all on the sly!! ;)

and if they get a same kind of dose from the girls , they are such cringing,complaining cry babies.....planning and plotting blackmail,degradation,murder and what not so that they can forgive.......poor poor mama's babies forever!!;) how can the wimps and wussez handle break ups maturely and bravely?!!!!;)

Too bad Melanie can not humble herself to live in her actual place in society. Grasping to be above herself makes her financially vulnerable to a sour loser and misuser like Mike who enlists the help of his nefarious cohorts.

A sour loser -- won't just accept a breakup and go on with life, like millions of normal people have to do.

A misuser -- who deliberately with malicious intent, treats, make that mistreats, a woman like no female should be mis-handled (unless she makes it clear and obvious that is what she wants).

Agree with the first commenter. This is a bad story.

Paul in Oklahoma

Mike is low life fucked up Guy.

So she gets all the sex she wants and more plus the apt rent cash and a free room. Whats yhe problem?

What's scary, is this story rates over 4.

No wonder she treated him like the worthless piece of garbage he is. Go to the cops and have them put in jail....