All Comments on 'The Fall Ch. 06'

by Sovereign_State

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petertowerspetertowersover 13 years ago
Another interesting read

Thanks again for another extremely interesting chapter. Who's to say your mom wouldn't be interested in collaborating with your story?

Have a good break in the north east. Pete

Rad'lRad'lover 13 years ago
A slow start, true, but -

you are building the tension well. Exploring the thoughts and mores of the late 19th century opens up many, many avenues. Good, great, keep it up! Thanks.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Nice direction...

Suggest you review some of the infamous electrical medical devices available back then which had rather dubious uses... rbbrmstrone

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago

Keep the good work, Lady. I suspect that Mistress Eliza and yourself have similar imagination and the same artistic vision of the lifestyle...

So you came close to your northern neighbour of Province of Quebec? That maybe explains why we have warm Holidays... ;)

aniram

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago

Update this story, please! I've been waiting for another chapter!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
brilliant!

please write more...i love your story -- unusual, compelling and unpredictable ..

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago

Please write more! I do enjoy your writing style, it is very unique.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
This is amazing! Please give us more!

This is amazing! Please give us more!

bunky28bunky28about 12 years ago
The Fall

Most exciting and I love the way you also explain the history of it all. I read a lot of the 17th-19th century and find it sexually exciting. Please continue this story soon.

Bunky28

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Hot

This was very exciting read can't wait for an update. Would really like to see more sounding stuff. Just curious is Ella a guy cuz that would b a nice little twist for the doc.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago

Absolutely loved it!! I can't wait for the next chapter

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
SO GOOD.

So, I do agree with one of the anons, Ella being a guy would be a beautiful twist, and more sounding stuff would be excellent!!! Keep up the compelling work, thank you very much!

Anonymous
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