All Comments on 'The Fallen Ch. 02'

Let me guess - the older gentleman is Dad.

Excellent start. Looking for to the next chapter.

This is great, I'm eager to read more!

Next chapter soon as possible please.

My thanks for the interest in my story. It pleases me greatly that people are finding enjoyment in my work. This spurs me to continue on. Also wanted to let everyone know chapter 3 is under construction and should be ready for publishing in a week or so. If this changes I will be sure to update my profile and place another comment here. Thanks again! <3

If this isn't a ripping good yarn, I don't know what is!

Thanks again!

Good story, very good writing, fine action and some sex. PLEASE keep it up :)

Ruby this is one of the best stories I've ever read. Never give up on these people you've created.

Yeah.. Two chapters in and we are still in the dark. Sure shits happening but it’s meaningless without more context.

Basically this is that fucked up tv show ‘Lost’.