All Comments on 'The Fallen Ch. 02'

Yeah.. Two chapters in and we are still in the dark. Sure shits happening but it’s meaningless without more context.

Basically this is that fucked up tv show ‘Lost’.

Ruby this is one of the best stories I've ever read. Never give up on these people you've created.

Good story, very good writing, fine action and some sex. PLEASE keep it up :)

If this isn't a ripping good yarn, I don't know what is!

Thanks again!

My thanks for the interest in my story. It pleases me greatly that people are finding enjoyment in my work. This spurs me to continue on. Also wanted to let everyone know chapter 3 is under construction and should be ready for publishing in a week or so. If this changes I will be sure to update my profile and place another comment here. Thanks again! <3

Next chapter soon as possible please.

This is great, I'm eager to read more!

Excellent start. Looking for to the next chapter.

Let me guess - the older gentleman is Dad.