by Unlocked Door
A very good start to a story i could really get in to. I can't wait for daughter-mom-stepdad relationship. I look forward to reading more of your thoughts.
Now that you have everyone's interest, don't stop writing.
Mom has to get in on the action soon????
auhh why did u have to stop writing...you big tease..would love to hear about mom and daughter getting together.....
I'm so glad I read this! Looking forward to the next story. *wink* -ToyingTabitha
That was a wonderful start to what could be a very sensual story. I enjoyed chatting with you this morning and really think you should continue. You have a loving way with words, and I am well aware of the antics of a 17/18 year old young girl and what effect they can have on daddies. hugs wendy
I enjoy how open the mother is with her husband looking at other women. It is also nice that the daughter doesn't just turn into a complete slutright away and that she stays shy and reserved to a point. And best of all, I love thongs like I think you love thongs and am very happy that you describe them well. Maybe a little more detail on what the wife wears. Maybe a future episode they could go out to dinner or something and have them dress nicely but somehow have some thong interaction.
I'm a step Dad thats in the same position as you with teasing 18 year old daughter. I can only hope that my situation will turn out half as good as yours. Please continue writing your story as we are all dying to see where this ends up.