All Comments on 'The Fate of Terra Ch. 16'

Really enjoyed the story even without the sex

Considering the date of the last chapter, I believe somebody just should take initiative and continue on by a slightly different name - in case the real author is still kicking and is too lazy or smth...

Just found this story yesterday. Read it through. Very enjoyable. Admit having to start keeping list of names though.

I do hope you are able to complete this tale.

Please do more

This is a great story, well told. I hope all is well with you.

...abandoned/ unfinished stories. I hate getting invested in the world only to find there's nothing. Wish there was a warning label. Dear i_f, you may be gone but you're not forgotten.

Nthusiastic

That you'll finish this. Your concept, character development, and descriptions are all excellent. You are indeed a true and gifted storyteller.

I finish the unfinished

Path first, Fate second.

All support is most welcome

JC

Ch 1-3 info sheet published in 2 weeks

Good to know. Look forward to the beginning of the end..

excellent story indeed! I too hope all is well with you and that you continue this story, You are a very gifted writer!

The story is progressing well and is already 1/3 done. we aim for around 4 pages and should be able to get it out by the end of next month.

Check out my page for updates

JC and the Team

Chapter 16 got seriously stupid... if the ship is vulnerable when it comes out of hyperspace why wouldn't the crew be at Battle Stations? Every crew member has a communicator so none on board could be surprised by hull breaches when Pan is in contact with every one of them at all times.

Mutineers couldn't ever organize because of those same communicators, ignoring completely the suddenly worthless psych profiles on every crew member that were somehow fudged. Riiiiight.

Looks like the author decided editors for this chapter weren't worth his trouble. Too bad.

Mai verific sa vad daca continui sau e abamdonata

Please do not abandon this oooh so wonderful story. Keep chapter 17 and others coming pleeeeaaaaasssssseeeeee!!!

As the title says, I've taken on all of I_F's works and am bringing them back to the fore where they belong.

JC

Can someone tell me why stories are getting taken down and writers accounts are just being deleted. What's happen to this website! Ugh

This is the 5th year and nothing.

Interpid_fate...your loyal reader is leaving too.

...tired of waiting.

I continued this seires, find it over on my page

JC

What page are you referring to? Facebook? Or something else?

JC is referring to his LIT page

How do I find your page, it's not available.

Please let us know how to find you and the resthe of the story

Look under F in Sci-Fi & Fantasy. the name changed slightly, you will recognize it though.

Thank you so much JC_The Continuer

This series continues on my Lit page. Click on my name and look under the 'stories' tab to continue reading.

Chapter 23 is available on my Patreon: www.patreon.com/jcthecontinuer

JC

is starting to scrub the past, he stole and is selling Path of the Necromancer on Amazon, no doubt he will try and do the same to this story as well as all the others he 'continued' his lit page is already scrubbed of all his addition, he has gotten Path pulled from literotica entirely, and despite his preface to Path continuations of Intrepid being the original author he is now claiming on Amazon that it was his story all along and Intrepid stole the story from him

Do not reward this thief

Pls someone sue this guy .The nerve of this guy motherfucker madeup the story path of the necromancer on his own after interpid_fate already posted it and now he claiming on Amazon and patreon that he is the original writer and interpid_fate is the cheater. Both is his stories were published on Literotica years ago and the asshole (JC) tried to continue after him , u can see it in his username he is continuer not the author, his posts came AFTER the interpid_fate all ready posted it, and he claims interpid stole it, and the greedy bitch is trying earn the money from someone else work,i don't think he has any proof that he posted the stories anywhere else before interpid_fate. Interpid_fate where ever u r bless u and thank you for bringing us this magnificent story.

I have read this same story by someone else and there is more to it than the ending posted. Someone else posted that this author is claiming another authors work?

There is a version on wattpad that appears to be a continuation of the unfinished story and is dedicated to the original author.

You get 16 chapters into a story and find that the author has dropped off the face of the earth. Why can't they finish a story then post it in it's entirity. I don't care if someone else has finished the story. If an author quits in the middle it's fair for someone else to take up where it was left off and finish it.

yeah its on wattpad but stops at the same place says to be continued, last updated july 8th

https://www.wattpad.com/755494207-fate-of-terra-chapter-16-5-adaptation

The story there is the same as this one and stops in the same place.

Do you think someone who can write a story of this level would stop out of choice or if someone of honour and respect ask to continue the story it would have been completed. I think enjoying what you have received for free should be enough. I have enjoyed the stories here and appreciate the time all the writers have given and if life or death stops them so be it . Self entitlement sorry your disappointed lol.

Please continue this series

chur m8 awsum story

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I am one of your followers that keep checking back to see if you have advanced The Fate of Terra yet. This is my 3rd read (4th if count the time I read on WattPad) and I am still waiting for some more of the great writing you do that will continue this really good story.

I hope to see something soon, or you could give us a comment that tells us why things are not going to come. Thanks for a great story.

Love it! 5*

I have been reading on this site for 20 years. Rarely does an author walk that fine line between suspension of belief and outright BS, you sir should have published this story as is. I consider you an author that could compare to the harem lit/ sci-fi the likes of Jon van stry, Jan stryvant, Tefler, and William arand.

Unfortunately you seem to have pulled a similar trick of some of my favourite authors on this site. iE... You have disappeared without a trace like Joe Brolly and Evil_Alpaca.

ErikT

This story has a continuation on Patreon...The new Author is JC_The continuer and it goes on to 23 chapters and is very well done...the catch? you have to subscribe to his Patreon page to get access, and dig through years of archival posts to find the .DOC files...then you have to manipulate to DOC files to read them (turn the text on by coloring the text black...it is currently set to white). The next catch is that JC is not currently very interested in continuing this particular story, and has left chapter 23 at another cliff hanger...for the last 2 years. he talks about starting up again, but he seems to not be writing much of anything, even on Patreon. He has also continued Path of the Necromancer as well, and has left that one farther along but also hanging...

5th read and it gets better everytime

Another great novel to never be ever be completed what a shame.

you either die a hero, or live long enough to see yourself become the villain

Just re-read the what is avallable. it appears to have lost at least a chapter, if not more! & from the other commentators the author has disappeared. So we will never know how the war goes.

Good start, but seems around chapter 5 until maybe 15 it changed from a story to a story outline - except the abusive sex scenes. Couple of quibbles; we repeatedly see " Once and awhile" when "Once in a while" is meant, and laser guns don't show as a line between the gun and target as stated in this chapter/shown in fiction shows; like a laser pointer, laser beams would be silent and invisible (except at the terminals). Even factors such as smoke in the pathway only expose the beam by creating terminals to the beam, scattering the light from those points.

Great story, will anyone be able to continue this?

If you have an Amazon account, please feel free to log-on and report James C Laird for possible Theft of Copyrighted Material. (At the very least, "...Fate of..." and "...Necromancer.)

Even if Intrepid is dead (not that I'm ill wishing him or his family), any material authored by him remains property of his estate for 70 years past his Death (Thank you Disney Corp.).

As such, Laird's placing a 2018 Copyright on it is illegal and obscene.

There is a slim possibility that Laird is I_F, but I have my doubts.

Alas, another orphaned masterpiece (warts and all) on Literotica...

I think that you should continue writing more of this story

GREAT Story, can not wait to read what happens next.

GREAT Story so far, can not wait to read what happens next. This story would make a Great anime.