All Comments on 'The Fateful Indian Honeymoon'

Then I knew what it was.

sent to LW! The worst of it? The site posted it, with rape and all!

This story does nothing to make me think they don't. What awful people. What a horrible story.

The story was exotic and fantastic. Just a fact that it shouldn't be practical. Till theory its just fantastic!!!!

Great story. Makes you want to read the next part.

So where is the next part...

As an author, did you check it once? You are not sure of who is who's wife and attributed names wrongly in the course of the story. As per your first paragraph, Rohit and Nita are a pair, but check next few paragraphs, Rohit was surveying Nita, instead of Mira. You have made it a mess by not remembering the names of the characters you yourself created. Writing an erotic story does not allow you jumble up names and characters.

I loved the story. And i want to keep reading. Pleaseeeee write the next part nah!

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