All Comments on 'The Festival Ch. 02'

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nthusiastic about 6 years ago

Clever

So as I was reading, I started disliking Roland more & more. When he used Patty & broke her heart, I started to regret reading this chapter. Then he realized what a horrible thing he'd done & made it all better & I was so happy after all. Good job yanking my emotions around. You could easily submit this to the April Fools contest as a contender.

bruce22 about 5 years ago

This was like a bronco riding contest

You have to hold on tight and hope for the best. The author produced a classical version of magic mixed with sex.

Anonymousabout 5 years ago

Superb

Excellent mix of realism and magic

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