All Comments on 'The Fight I Could Never Win Ch. 01'

by NarcissusRex

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MasterfuljimMasterfuljimover 10 years ago
Very graphic

Very well written.

Graphic and descriptive.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Pathetic tale

You want us to believe that a professional fighter would have not hit her? And that he would have been so far off balance and so slow that she would have been able to handcuff him? And that nobody was around after a fight? Just him in an empty locker room? Too many large holes in this sorry story. A poor effort.

redlion75redlion75over 10 years ago

this was like a bad attempt at a "i once was" tragedy.

tazz317tazz317over 10 years ago
A FIGHTER WHO IS A SUB

a very strange combo, TK U MLJ LV NV

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