All Comments on 'The First SaR Mission Ch. 10'

Love her wolf.

Thank you

Ignore the nit pickers and others that don't write. Each writer has their own style and you have evolved a style that suits you, that is what is most important. I read all sorts of styles and yours is easy to follow.

I just read up to date in your series. I am enjoying it immensely. I'm not a critic type so you'll have to get your aggravation elsewhere! I enjoy series that have good characters and plot lines. Yours has both as well as originality in the plot. Thank you for your work, and please keep writing! Mike

This is the first chapter that i havent been pulled out of the story due to punctuation. Thanks.

Liked the injection of humour at the end, I wouldn’t fret too much over micro-managing the punctuation, spelling, capitals and auto-spell word subs are way more irritating to most of us, I’d focus on those if you feel the need to worry, but the bones of this story are great, many thanks for writing and posting here on Lit, cheers Ppfzz.