All Comments on 'The First Step - Step 01'

brilliant very hot horny story the first step-step 01.

so very ertic and so very hot and horny . reading this was a real joy. i do hope the next part is going to taking you into being taken by another may by a bi sexual bitch

I voted 5 stars. I think your writing brings the words to life in the reader's mind. Descriptive but not too much. I could feel her apprehension and the need that helped her get beyond it. I don't know if any of this story comes from real life experience, but I'd have to assume so because it's so well written. Though I've never expected a slave to keep still and quiet during a punishment from Me. Hope to see more soon.

P.S. A pleasure to read something without grammatical or spelling errors.

Most excellent

Thanks for the positive feedback, I got lucky with an excellent editor who corrected my grammar for me and helped me to refine, I am glad you enjoyed it, I am currently writing the next part, which will be from his point of view. SGrey

Very vivid! Giving 5 stars and wish I could give more. Keep up the Great work!

Nicely done. Easily one of the better BDSM stories I've read. I have a few on here myself, but they are poor examples compared to your work.

NICE

Very nice.

Many BDSM stories get bogged down in H/he and S/she and all the rituals, which I think is boring.

You tell us some of the "why," but you focus on the "what happened." Applause!