All Comments on 'The Forest Elf Ch. 01'
by kuffsnkeys
- 20 Comments
Anonymousover 15 years agoI really enjoyed your well written story,it kept my attention well. I thought the storyline with an elf and and orc was different and I would like to learn more of Yersia's adventures with the Orcs.So more chapters if you can please!
bitofkinkover 15 years agoGood story, plot development and steamy sex. But you need an editor - the typos were distracting. It is a different storyline and I'd like to see where you go from here.
Anonymousover 15 years agoi enjoyed this story... it is great all on it's own but I can't help but wonder what happens between them as time passes .. i would love it if you wrote more about them.. it was wonderful though.. thank you for sharing this story with all of us..
brazen1988over 15 years agoi like this story so keep going. update really soon please.
Anonymousabout 14 years agoSimply Amazing. There were a few grammatical errors, but otherwise I couldn't complain. Disregard that, The grammar was excellent, only one or two spots that aren't even worth nit-picking over.
Anonymousover 12 years agowhen will you writr more? i have read this when it 1st came out, and have just came back to it some years later.
demure_kittyabout 11 years agoHella good baby, Hella good! This story so totally rocked, it could set a new standard for fantasy erotica. Clit in the throat. Riot! LOL
ScribeDeErosabout 10 years agoLol, the "Elfish Effect". Just messing with you, man. Great story, going to read the other two chapters now.
Anonymousabout 2 years agoGet a copy of the old Linda Lovelace movie called "Deep Throat" and you'll see where the idea of the clit in the throat came from.
Levindlalmost 2 years agoFun story! The only thing that I would say is that you need an editor to go through it. There are many grammatical and spelling mistakes that could easily be taken care of. Contact me if you are interested in help
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